
Coaching and Editing Services
There are many ways to get help with your manuscript, ranging from a manuscript evaluation to a complete coaching package.
Some areas of focus for my coaching and editorial services include:
- Story Premise
- Character development
- Presentation
- Plot
- Narrative voice and structure
- Technical issues
- Writing effective dialogue
I am particularly well-versed in women’s fiction, mainstream fiction, literary fiction, fantasy and magic realism, mystery, and domestic suspense.
I offer the following packages and services:

I’M ON A MISSION!
$997 per month
In this package you will receive:
• Inline feedback on weekly submissions of up to twenty pages
• Two thirty-minute phone calls per month to discuss feedback and next steps

I’M ON A MISSION BUT I HAVE A DAY-JOB!
$489 per month
In this package you will receive:
- Inline comments on bi-weekly submissions of up to twenty pages
- One monthly thirty-minute phone call to discuss feedback and next steps
Project Evaluation ($497)
This is a mini-package designed to give you a chance to see what working with a book coach is like. The goal of this package is to help you lay a strong foundation for your book before you end up writing 300 pages, only to find that many of them are destined for the trash bin. The package includes:
- Review of your book outline, up to ten pages
- Review of the first fifty pages of your manuscript
- Two half-hour phone calls, to be scheduled after each of your two submissions
Manuscript Evaluation ($997 up to 250 pages*)
- A complete and thorough reading of your manuscript
- An editorial letter outlining both the strengths of your manuscript and areas for improvement
- One one-hour phone call with me to discuss feedback and next steps
*Additional charge for longer manuscripts
Manuscript Edit*
- A complete and thorough reading of your manuscript
- Inline comments highlighting specific examples of strengths and problem areas
- An editorial letter summarizing the feedback provided in inline comments
- A one-hour phone call with me to discuss your feedback and create a plan for moving forward
The amount of work involved in a manuscript edit varies widely, depending on the length and complexity of the manuscript, and the quality of the writing. I therefore cannot guarantee a price without looking at a sample of the manuscript in question. If you are interested in this service, please email me and include an attachment of ten (10) manuscript pages. Once I have reviewed your pages, I will contact you with a price quote.
*Price varies
To purchase any of these services, please email me to arrange a free thirty-minute consultation.